Proposal Presentation

I was set the task of presenting my ideas for my magazine in a Dragon Den's style proposal pitch. I used Powerpoint to create my simplistic presentation with basic bullet points which I expanded on in my dialogue notes.
First of all I outlined my genre, as I have in a previous post, and gave my reasons for choosing mainstream, popular music. I then gave my criteria of target readers. I then listed what would make my magazine conventional, by listing which conventions I'd stick to on my cover and DPS (as at this point I hadn't completely finished my contents research) and which ones I wouldn't.
I then included results from my questionnaire like my name and who would be on the cover. I also included the suggestions I'd got from the open ended question of my questionnaire.
Constructive critiscism I received was to not forget about the contents, that I used complex words (although the language I used in my proposal were key terms, and not actually the language I'll use in my magazine), the plain colours of my presentation (I was going for the simplistic effect!) and my lack of images used.
Positive feedback I received included detailed research, clear ideas, good knowledge of key terms, talking to my audience in my presentation, large target audience and my personal beliefs coming across.
This rounds up all of my research into a summary and now it's full steam ahead onto planning as I received my schedule and deadlines today! Argh!